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©2009 *lpeters
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Artist's Comments

This piece was painted for the "New Born" competition at Conceptart.org.
I was aiming for it to look as though she was shedding something similar to old snake skin, so hopefully it does.

Critiques


:iconitneverends:
Wow what an interesting piece of art! The perspective, the expression of the woman and the many little details make this image a high quality work.
The idea that she was shedding her old "snake skin" is quite original!
I'm not sure how shedded snake skin looks like but with your description I believe that she's really doing this.^^
Otherwise I thought it might be a cloak made out of silk.

Anyway I think you did perfect on the face symmetry but the hair could get some more light and shadow shades.
Also I miss some details in the dress. Right now the dress is fine with the design but it still looks a bit "hard". As if it wouldn't be tissue. Maybe you could add there some kind of texture.

That's it.^^ Excellent work and keep it up! :D
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:iconxixkilledxsuicidex:
wow this is fantastic!

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:iconadelenta:
Woah..that is brilliant :wow: awesom coloration and composition, wonderful details, and i LOVE the shading!
:icondrome57:
Great render of a good concept! Her makeup might be clashing a bit with the idea of being newly born, but otherwise a damn good job :)
:iconlpeters:
Thanks for he comment. Your absolutely right about the make up. Originally i intended her with no makeup, but i was trying to bring out out the colour of her eyes so she ended up with some.

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:iconlpeters:
Thanks heaps for the great comment!

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Hesitance has weathered thin
In a silence too generous for me
Osmosis is moving in
The distant sound of chimes in the wind
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:iconlpeters:
Thankyou very much

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Hesitance has weathered thin
In a silence too generous for me
Osmosis is moving in
The distant sound of chimes in the wind
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My Gallery: [link]
:iconpurplecupcakes:
Stunning work! =)

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:iconahrjey:
Oh my goodness, this is amazing! I love her complexion and the tone of the piece overall, And before reading your description I could tell that she was supposed to be resembling a snake shedding its skin :nod: This is definitely an interesting concept, good luck in the competition!
:iconelij156:
Just commenting to let you know that this piece has been featured here --> [link]

enjoy :-)

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